I would love
To shine on your couch
My gold fur to say hello
Every morn; I’m the love of your life
Golden Fur-Ball
-Shambhavi
Know SIDLAK:
Sidlak poetry (sid/lak) is a structured poetry consisting of 5 lines with 3-5-7-9 syllables AND A COLOR. The last line must be a COLOR that describes the whole poem or the feelings of the writer.
P.S: I’ve fallen in love with this form of poetry! 😍😍
Qui will love this ..
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Haha Shambhavi you too seem to have fallen in love with sidlak. Good one 🙂
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Yes I have Radhika! 😍😍
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👍👍
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Doggies 🙂 What a furry and cute poem
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Doggie love 😍😍 Thanks a lot Prajakta!
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What’s special in this form ?
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It’s like a challenge to write it the certain way abiding by the rules. I usually write free form and that’s what makes it thrilling. The flow of words and the colour and emotion describing the entire piece is amazing. You must give it a try to like it!!😁😁😎
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Wow ! You are doing great !
I am not comfortable with rules in writing. In with no rules it’s difficult, with rules I will fail.
Glad knowing about your structure of writing.
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Haha 😀 it’s alright! Someday when you feel like doing something hatke, you can always try this one! ^_^
Thankyou for stopping by and sharing your thoughts with me! 😊😊
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😊😊😊
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Fantastic.
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Thank you Sagar!☺☺
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Ur Welcome Shambhavi ji.
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😀
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And you are doing best in this form,wonderfullu penned👌👍
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Thank you Prashant! Really means a lot! 😁😁
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Awesome! And what a cute way of writing!! 🙂 🙂
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That’s great! I’m glad you liked it and yes indeed it’s an interesting way to write a poem! ^_^
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Nice shambhavi😉
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Thank you dear. 😊😊
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Furry sidlak..interesting…I’m also working on one..soon I need you to comment and tell me how is my homework..please guide me how can I put the last line in color..
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Wow! That’s awesome! Post soon I wanna read it!! 😊😊😍 You can just select the last line and select the colour you like. Try doing it on Google Chrome. 😀
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OK
I’ll try but if struck I’ll again bother you..
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Yes ofcourse! 😁
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How wonderfully written and so creative 🙂 love you sister 🙂
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Thank you sissy! I’m happy to share this with you. Our love for dogs. 😍😍
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Nice poem Shambavi. Drawn here by title(labrador) . Learnt about sidlak structure. Thank you.
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You’re most welcome! Thank you so much for your kind words.
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Cute puppy! Poem is nice too.
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Thanks a lot! Indeed! He is very adorable!
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