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Morning rays
Dispelled night remains
Glistening gold corollas
Facing Sun like us facing the Lord
Yellow Tranquil
~Shambhavi
Know Sidlak:
Sidlak poetry (sid/lak) is a structured poetry consisting of 5 lines with 3-5-7-9 syllables AND A COLOR. The last line must be a COLOR that describes the whole poem or the feelings of the writer.
So beautiful… the lines, the image, the design, the overall poem… its superb 🙂
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Thank you sis! Thank you thankyou!!😁😁😁 I’m grateful to you for introducing me to this form. I’m lovin’ it!!😍😍
You said I’ve written it well, that means everything turned out to be fine. *bliss* *content*
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Yes you do and like the morning rays they are shining 🙂
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^_^
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Your poem is a very good mind refresher… Shambhavi..the picturistic effect of the image combined with the beautiful words used is outstanding!!!
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Thank you so much Kiran! I really appreciate your kind words. I too love the picture a lot. So vibrant and life like. ^_^
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Be outstanding in your own field.
Hold your head high like sunflower.
Spread the seeds of happiness.
Always stay on the brighter side like the sunflower.
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Beautiful words stringed together spreading happiness and love! 😍 You write really well Kiran!
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Thank you so much Shambhavi 😊😊👭 have a nice time.
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You too Kiran!🌷🙂
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Very well penned Shambhavi. 🙂
Thank you for introducing this form of poetry. I have tried to write one. Do visit my blog and give your feedback.
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Heyy Radhika! This is awesome. I’m going to your blog right away. Isn’t Sidlak a nice form of poetry?! ^_^ Thank you for the lovely comment dear. 🙂
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Yes I just fell in love with it 😇😍
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Me too! I dunno why I took so long to attempt this style! ☺
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🙂🙂
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So Beautiful Shambhavi ji.
Minimum Effort Maximum Result.
Thode Words M ein Bahut Kuch Samjha Diya.
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Haha!😁 Thank you for encouraging me always! I am gratified by your kind words.
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Always Ur Welcome. Shambhavi ji.
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😁😁
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Lovely words so fitting the image
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That’s so kind of you to say! Thank you for reading it! 😊😊
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Beautiful poem and image 🙂 Love sunflowers!
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Hi Leyla! Thanks a lot for stopping by and sharing your thoughts with me!
Sunflowers are magnificent and vibrant and the list goes in!😀😀😊😊
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Fell out of bed feeling down. This has brnghteied my day!
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Thank you Patty!🌻🌻
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Thank you Patty!🌻🌻
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