On a tree
Beautiful bird chirps
Lovely Melody to ears
It hops over branches stealthily
Husky brown.
~Shambhavi
My friend Qui of LoveQuirky writes beautiful Sidlak Poetries and she had asked me to give it a try. Finally I jotted down one. I hope I’ve done justice to this beautiful form of poetry.
Know Sidlak:
Sidlak poetry (sid/lak) is a structured poetry consisting of 5 lines with 3-5-7-9 syllables AND A COLOR. The last line must be a COLOR that describes the whole poem or the feelings of the writer.
I don’t know about poem, structure. Loved expressions flowing in poem.
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Wow! Thank you so much! ^_^
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😊😊
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Marvelous entry
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Thanks a lot! It really means a lot!😀😀
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My pleasure. You are amazing
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You’re too kind! 🙂 Glad to have met you here dear friend! ^_^
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Likewise
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😁😁
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Lot of creativity involved here. U did it well
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Thank you very much! 😊 I found it interesting.
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Thanks, I got to learn something new today about sidlak poetry…….full marks on your maiden attempt 👍
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I am glad! 😀 Thanks a ton Radhika, for your lovely comment!
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My pleasure 😊
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Lovely picture Caprio.. 🙂 and the last line with colour is so cool!
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Ash! How’re ya?! I hope you’re in pink of health and dancing your way to tunes of glory okay maybe bollywood numbers! 😋😋 Thanks a lot dear. That bird is cute! So tiny with a voice so sweet and musical. 😊 God’s creation amazes me.
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Lovely poetry and thankyou for introducing me to such a brilliant style of writing..I’ll also try some time..
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Thank you ! I’m glad to have inspired you to write it too! Looking forward to read more from you! ^_^
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Thank you…stay blessed..
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You too!
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Lovely
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Thank you for reading it! ^_^
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My pleasure.
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🙂
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So very beautiful sidlak poetry 🙂 thank you so much sister 🙂
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You’re my inspiration sissy! ^_^
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Wonderful Shambhavi ji.
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Hey Sagar! Thank you! 😀
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Have Nice Day Shambhavi Ji,
Welcome.
Kuch Hindi Mein Likhne Ka Saucha.
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Yes I’ve given it a thought. Will try to write this week. 🙂
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Okay & Welcome Shambhavi ji.
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