When he smiles he lightens up my eyes.
His strong arms pull me in coziest embrace.
His curls feels so right with my waves.
Pink lips so smooth, camouflages the stubble.
His eyes so deep, often I find myself
getting lost in them.
I love him so very much.
I would want nothing more,
but his love and companionship.
It’s not want, need or seek.
It’s a promise of eternity
that’s how long shall I be with him.
~ Shambhavi©
Emotions wrapped in words
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Beautiful poem😍😍
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Thanks a lot dear! Full of emotions I must agree. 😍😍
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I can feel the love for him..
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Aw! That’s so sweet of you to say. He’s my everything indeed. ^_^
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This is really pretty. Full of emotions.
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Hi Eva! Thankyou so much!😁😁
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Very beautiful shambhavi
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Thanks a lot Preeti! I really appreciate your kind words! ^_^
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A promise for eternity….. feelings of love so beautifully put to words 👍
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Thankyou so much Radhika! You’re too kind! 😍😍😊
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Aww….. that’s so sweet of you. Welcome 😊
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Have a great weekend!😊😊
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You too 🙂
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Thankyou!😁😁
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Love wrapped with beautiful emotions straight on the papers..👌👌☺
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Wow! True that. Thanks a lot Prashant!
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Love eternity
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We two love eternity together!
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So romantic, I want to feel like a women and try to think like her and then write a beautiful poem like this!!😊😊😊
You
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That’s a beautiful way to understand someone. You’re on the right path! Trying women’s shoes on, ok not in the literal sense. But ok you know..
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Yeah I know…in emotional sense…how she thinks….is it not..?
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Yes indeed! I couldn’t agree more on this!😁
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😊😊😊
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Thankyou again! Have a great weeken! 😁😁
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Wishing you the same
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A very well described poem full of estatic feelings for the beloved
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Kiran, thankyou so much for the lovely comment! ^_^
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Correction …ecstatic
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Wow!!
“When he smiles he lightens up my eyes.
His strong arms pull me in coziest embrace.
His curls feels so right with my waves.
Pink lips so smooth, camouflages the stubble.
His eyes so deep, often I find myself
getting lost in them.
I love him so very much.’
So Nice Shambhavi ji.
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Hey! Thankyou so much for the lovely comment! 😊😊 It feels great to have my work understood and appreciated by great writers like you.
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Thank U Shambhavi ji,
But I’m Not A Great Writer I’m A Simple Parson.
But U are Great One.
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You’re a great soul Sagar! Keep writing and spreading happiness around. Thankyou for making me smile! 😀😀
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Thank U,
Stay Happy & Blessed.
Shambhaviji.
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Wish you the same!!😀
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Thanks Shambhavi ji.
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A profound love ❤
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Thanks a lot dear! 😊😊
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