You were sent by God,
My savior!
To pull me out:
of the dungeon-
Of misery and gloom.
You saved me,
You saved my soul.
Your caressing touch,
Doused in love and kindness,
Healed the wounds,
That bled on every touch!
Your eyes did the magic,
I got lost in them,
Traversing through your open soul-
I found my shore.
Our shore of oneness,
Our abode of love,
I drowned in the sea of our emotions-
Only to drown the suffering,
I came afloat, to you-
My savior.
I failed to resist your magnetism,
Your kind soul pulled me in.
I’m glad I failed there,
I’m glad I stopped running.
We started with our perfect ‘Nirvana‘,
We made it eternal with not one promise,
But seven vows.
Seven vows of heaven!
And then, Nothing else mattered!
~Shambhavi
So so brilliant… Liked it lot
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Thankyou so much Sup! 🙂
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You have deep intrest in spirituality. I believe!
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Yes, I do. I am trying to inculcate more of spirituality in my life. 🙂 I started UltimateSolace with the aim to do so. Now I feel more close to me, I am at peace with my own essence. 🙂
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That’s great !
If you don’t mind , I wanted to know, what’s your source of inspiration .
You are on right track, who is your mentor ?
Having faith in spirituality means you are blessed. But from you are getting blessing is a question?
Just curious, to know…if you don’t mind sharing.
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Hey there! Source of inspiration is me, the nature and the situations and people we encounter in day to day life. I just wanted one thing, peace. That was back in 2014. I had a rough past, and that had severed my ties with the old me. I wanted to become the girl I used to be. I wanted to be happy. I wanted solace.
It started with that, my journey to achieve the impossible, twas at that point of time.
Inspite of the hard times, broken dreams, broken me, I never lost faith in God, the Ultimate power, the One who I am answerable to. That kept me going. The undying faith I have in God is because of my mother. She is the one who taught me to be close to God, by praying following our duties, etc. It’s her, if you ask who my mentor is. And I guess it answers all your questions. Blessing hand is above all. Have faith. Have faith in that Hand and have faith in yourself.
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Yeah you have answered all my queries.
Thanks for sharing your views!
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Are you into spirituality?
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Yes sort of !
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Wow! Just wow!
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That’s really beautifully written..😃👌
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Hey there! Thanks a ton! ^_^ this piece is very close to me.
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That’s amazing… I recollected this song nothing else matters after reading the last lines in your poem. That song is beautiful too.
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‘Nothing else matters’ has significance in my life. I love that song by Metallica and I meant the same in the poem. The wordings are so beautiful. ^_^
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Yes I was wondering if it was similar or no. But honestly I was lost in the words from your poem so I couldn’t find any similarities…
You write really well but you express your emotions in a much better way..
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That’s a lot of appreciation! I am overjoyed to read your comment! 😀 Thankyou so much for your encouragement. I am so so glad that my words conveyed are heard and understood. *_* 🙂 v
You know what, this poem I had written for my husband. 🙂 He did read but didn’t understand it, poem is not his cup of tea!
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Hahaha… Never mind.. May be he couldn’t appreciate because he was truely speechless…😜
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Haha 😀 I bet! Better not be otherwise 😛
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Surely I will be the same as you suggested😉
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Ahh. Don’t be afraid, I am not violent! 🙂 (as of now)
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Hopefully not.. The way you’re finding that idea adventurous.. No one knows when would you be experimenting😜
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I can be dangerously adventurous as long as it’s not on top of the mountain. That’s a bit scary!
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But either ways, he might have felt a little more than great because of the efforts you put for him through your words… That’s one good thing about the situation I feel😃
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Awww so sweet of you dear. I feel good reading this. As I said you’re an optimist and that’s the best thing. Thankyou for this, I won’t get angry at him now 😀
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Hahaha… That was the motto.. Just saving someone from getting hurt physically..😜
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I know 😉 I guessed that already.
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It’s good to be understanding.. A lot of conflicts are resolved just by the feeling of empathy I suppose😃
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Yes, being a doctor, we are taught to be empathetic.. but even before entering the field I have been an empath. 😀 so lucky me
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Doctor being a blogger plus a nature lover with an adventurous approach towards life and lastly a 24×7 smiling face…
That’s a dangerous combination..🙈🙈🙈
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All I come to know that he appreciated you without actually understating your words and all he got was flying utensils towards him🙈
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Hahahaha 😀 I am not that intense, maybe a flying punch , I will spare him this time. Your idea of flying utensil sounds adventurous, rather try that next time! 😉 😉
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I bet you shouldn’t get him on WordPress or else he’ll find out where that idea of utensils came from😂
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Lol don’t worry, he is not into literature. So I guess you are safe. And after all girl is nothing without her secrets! 😉 He will not even try to have a peek!
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By God’s grace and your secret which is only a secret for your soulmate.. I am safe… Fortunately though.🙈🙈😜
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Lol 😀 Thank God. But he’s not not at all violent. So it’s alright. Or else 😂😂😂
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I don’t wish to know the consequences at all..🙈🙈
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😅😛😛😎🙆
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😂😂😂😂
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Your words touch the hearts of people around you.. It’s an amazing thing😃😃👍👍
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