I wish;
To see light of fallen stars,
Cracked up doubts,
On a ray of hope.
All my fear: let loose,
Surrounding me.
Enclosed within is energy,
Waiting to flee.
~Shambhavi
ULTIMATE SOLACE
Drowning in deep waters of life is what scares me the most and staying afloat is easier said than done! Sharing my thoughts and nuances of life here at Ultimate solace hoping that you all will join me on my journey of accepting life and not just staying afloat but enjoying every bit of it while being surrendered to the Divine!
ULTIMATE SOLACE 
I wish,you will become one of the best as well as most famous poet, one day!!!!!!!
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Aw! That’s so sweet of you. 🙂 It’s heartening to hear your thoughts on my poem and posts. 🙂 Big thank you to you. I know thank you is not enough. 🙂 Best wishes to you!
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Haha!! It reminds me “the filmy dialogue” after reading your comment, which is in hindi( In the hope,you understand hindi)..”Bus Duvva mai Yaad Rakhana !!”..hehe its Not at all suitable for here…. But actually its your highness..
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Lol 😀 Funny you! 😀
Yes, I do understand hindi, it being my mother tongue.
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ohhh terrri!!!Aissa hai kya !! Mujhe laga koi NRI hai jisko hindi nai aati!!!Lol…
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NRI who knows hindi 😛
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chalo 1 baat toh sahi nikali!!!
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Haha 😀
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May all your wishes come true.: -)
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I wish you the same 🙂
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That’s so sweet of you.
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back to back poetry.. is so so good vibes i get reading it. let the positive energy surround you shambhavi
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I am glad you felt the happy after reading it. I too want the positive energy to stay. I have been a pessimist for a very long time and now I want to turn the table. 🙂
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Happy*
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Happy to know that.. 🙂
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^_^ 😀
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Let ur emotions toggle from negativity to positivity
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Yeah! I am trying to do the same. Hows everything at office? Still enjoying the *silence period of in-activity*? 😉
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Beautiful!
you are a great poet shambhavi!
Would you like to attempt the free style writing challenge? Feel free to accept or otherwise.
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Hey Hargun thank you so much for your kind words dear. It means a lot. I would like to attempt it. I have written one already. 🙂
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Just the first two lines, and I feel like I have a shooting star in my own hands! You really write beautifully! ❤ Much love!
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Aw! Thank you so much 🙂 It’s wonderful to see my poem spreading happiness around. I’m glad you liked it dear 😀
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Nice
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Hey thank you 🙂
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Beautiful! It creates a powerful feel of just escaping away and see the light of fallen stars. 🙂
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Hey Shreya! I am glad you liked it. 🙂 It’s all embedded in us: the energy to shine and to rise. The moment we recognise our very own energy, powerful is born. 🙂
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Shambhavi, this is wonderful and engaging.
Keep it up!
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Thank you so much for your kind words! It means a lot! 🙂
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