On a gloomy day,
I set my sail,
Yet another day at bay.
Every ray of light,
Leaves beaded trails behind.
Every drop that falls,
Takes away a moment not all,
Wishes made on them:
Like counting stars,
On a stormy night,
With clouds and thunder,
No stars of wonder.
I sail away under the darkness,
Lashing waves make my blanket,
I was lost but found,
Stranded on an expanse,
Of golden sand,
Lost in sea of thoughts.
~Shambhavi
again..Gr8 1!! ..your ability to use rhyming words in poem ,is also appreciative..
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Thank you so much 🙂 I am glad you liked it. I didn’t intend to rhyme my thoughts, I guess they were set to rhyme 🙂
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No no…but full credit goes to you because everyone cant set those word,Its only you who posses this skill….
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Aw! That’s very kind of you, my friend.
I am gratified 🙂 Thank you again!
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The last four lines were absolute delight!
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Ah! Thank you so much Nidhi. 🙂
Your dressing sense and the choice of lip colour is just fabulous! Red! 🙂 My fav.
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Haha..thank u Shambhavi! M glad u liked it!
Thank u soo much
Lots of love❤️
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Wish you the same! ^_^
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Nice: -)
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Thanku Abhishek! 🙂
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Just keep up the good work.: -)
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Yes 🙂 I am looking forward to read more posts by you!
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Ok I will post. And thanks for the appreciation
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You’re welcome 🙂
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How was it?????
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It’s lovely 🙂
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I hope you liked it.
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Yes I did! 🙂
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I didn’t knew that I Can also write, but these words comes on there own I don’t know how????
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We all have unrecognized talent in us waiting to be recognized. A single stimulus is suffice to bring that talent to the surface. 🙂 Writing is one of the best way to express feelings and emotions. 🙂 Keep writing!
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Yeah you are right. Bit that person is lost for whom I wrote these posts.
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I get that from your posts 😦 Don’t worry. If it’s meant to be, God will make it happen. Have faith. Life doesn’t go the way we want, do your deed and have faith 🙂
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Now all this it is difficult for me to have faith.
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😦 I hope God gives you enough strength to face the difficult period. 🙂
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Yeah at last I pray to God that now keep me away from her and from all these so called feelings. In difficult time we realize who are with us and I realized It very well.
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Yeah, I can relate very well 🙂
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Very well* with your problem. Having faced similar situation in the past. Just pray to God, believe in yourself 🙂 Night follows day, you will find your sunlight too.
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Thank you so much for your support. I wish that sunlight comes soon.
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Nice one… No words to praise.
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Wow! Thank you so much 🙂
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Serenity is what this gave adventurous journey gave. Beautiful! Isn’t that place of golden sand, surrounded by the sea of thoughts so dreaded yet so attractive? I was lost but found – these five words tell so many stories. Every time we are lost in those thoughts, we discover ourselves – how strong we are, how we overcame all of that, how we stand tall after being knocked down. An absolute delight it was to read this! Brilliant imagery and everything else 🙂
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You got it right! Yay! Ditto, I must say. When we discover ourselves, there is no going back. However, we do get derailed sometimes, but our thoughts and inner voice do drag us back on track. 😛
Thank you so much Prateek for understanding the very intention bwhind this post. I am so so so glad that you enjoyed reading it! And as far as imagery, everything revolves around the sea for me. I dunno why, but it does. 🙂
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I am glad I was able to do some justice to this beautiful piece! And the sea is really a lovely thing to revolve around. The whole phenomenon of waves coming and going is just too addictive to walk away from 🙂
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You did that! 🙂 Yeah it’s the most beautiful place to be, try soaking your feet at the shore and gaze at the horizon, you will find peace. 🙂
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Addictive just like your words 🙂
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Aw! ^_^ Addicted? Doc orders Deaddiction right away!
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Hehe this addiction is for good for health Doc ! I swear ! ^_^
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^_^ Okay okay. Permission granted 😛
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Yaayy ! Favorite doctor ! 😀
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Haha 😀 Funny you!
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Haaw genuine me ! I never met a doctor giving away to her patient’s demands so easily 😛
I always used to get the injection no matter how much I told them that its not needed -_-
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Lol 😀 After rigorous research, I have come to a conclusion, that this addiction is alright. No way, I won’t be okay with patients not following my advice :O
Injection, my friend, has nothing to do with addiction of yours. 😀
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Haha okay ! Why don’t you write about your experiences and thoughts that your parents give you? Most of us here might never have seen the world from your eyes 😉
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Ya ya! 😀 I shall try that definitely. 🙂 Our parents teach us from their own experiences, but most of the time we do as we like. -_- I belong to same section I guess
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I think I am a little high ! I wanted to write ‘patients’, not ‘parents’ xD
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Exactly, and I was wondering why were you talking about parents, and my mom was not very happy with me today, so that’s why I ended up blurting that out. 😛
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I wonder if moms are ever happy with us
And I apologize for the confusion 😀
But all you said was quite true. We all belong to the same section. And I am sure our moms too belonged to that section once 😉
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I swear! But they prefer telling only the required part and they dim all the other stories revolving around it, latter is the one, to attract our attention. 😉
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High on what?! WordPress. That’s not mere addiction, you need treatment!
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Haha high on life 😛 And I know you are just saying that to earn that hefty fees of yours. *Runs away to the government dispensary*
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No way 😀 How dare you?! Haha :D(feels happy to not have dealt with such high degree of addiction;))
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Lol, ok I am too tired to go to another dispensary. The favorite doctor remains to be you. For the ultimate solace 😉
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Haha 😀 that’s so sweet of you ^_^
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Hehe thank you thank you ^_^
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Beautifully written. I enjoyed it. Will like to know you personally. Will you let me?
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Hey there! Thank you so much for your kind words and for stopping by my blog. I am glad you liked it. 🙂
Best wishes,
Shambhavi
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Hey there! I am not sure if my comments are getting delivered to you.
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They are sweetheart, I have been offline that is the reason.
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Oh okie
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i could imagine the kind of place u were describing in the poem 🙂 that the beauty of your poem. as always awesome shambhavi 🙂
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Hellos Sup! 😀 Isn’t that place lovely? I am happy that you enjoyed it. 🙂
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your words made that place it more beautiful here .. 🙂
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Aw! Thank you ^_^
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That’s a beautiful poem and that picture… Its amazing! Great work Shambhavi! I’d really love more of this kind 😀
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Hey Akanksha 🙂 Thank you so much! 😀 I will try to write more of this kind.
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Beautifully written 🙂
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Kritika, thank you dear:)
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Beautiful, Shambhavi!! However, I loved the ending the most 🙂
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Nimmi! Thank you so much dear 🙂
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Pleasure, dear! 🙂
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🙂
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Great play with words. I am lost in thoughts too, wish could find myself ashore 🙂
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Thank you so much:) Yes, you will find peace. Have faith 🙂
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The poem?❤
The picture?💋
Awesome piece!:D
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Aw! ^_^ Thank you so much! Iam so happy you liked it.
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You’re very welcome!
It is fab,indeed.:D
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Thank you again dear! 😀
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😀
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Nicely captured.
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Thank you so much Dakshi:)
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Wow Shambhavi… I am also lost in these words and the sea. Hey, someone find me. 😉
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Haha 🙂 You’re lost, you will be found, you never know, you will find something very interesting about you during your journey of re-locating your lost self
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Wow. Thank you so much Shambhavi.. That will be interesting.. 🙂
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🙂
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